Comments for SOPHIA: Awakening

Comment on Page 140 by chumash99

chumash99 — Tue, 24 Aug 2010 10:58:29 +0000

Ouch; this guy needs a lesson in manners. And who's this "Naz" character? And how come he answers the vid-phone butt-naked? Inquiring minds want to know!

Comment on Page 139 by greengirl77

greengirl77 — Sun, 15 Aug 2010 02:18:32 +0000

I miss the color, it made the comic so alive…

Comment on Page 139 by chumash99

chumash99 — Mon, 09 Aug 2010 11:43:32 +0000

"Before this is over, you'll be the one begging." Rock on, Luette! And just what did the cameras pick up? Inquiring minds want to know!

Comment on Page 138 by greengirl77

greengirl77 — Thu, 05 Aug 2010 08:17:49 +0000

I just found your comic through twc. I believe you have something great going here. I admit there are a few spelling errors and grammar errors that bother me. You should double check your uses of too, to and two.Words in your posts such as loss versus lose and loose instead of lose are other examples of this; you seem to just need a slight bit of editing. These are common yet distracting errors. I see you have corrected the than/then error, thank you! The story is good and it flows fairly well, even with the ton of flash backs. If you correct your spelling and homonym usage you would be outstanding as a writer. I love your story, keep it up I look forward to your next update.

Comment on Page 138 by Kubulai

Kubulai — Wed, 04 Aug 2010 06:06:36 +0000

So she has watched his motion. She has learned. Now she is unbound. Anything he does she learns and acquires. She will be his master in minutes.

Comment on Page 138 by Gillsing

Gillsing — Wed, 28 Jul 2010 15:58:49 +0000

Oh, but the sex is a reward for her, if she cries and begs hard enough. *insert more eyerolling here*

Though I suppose it could be a threat. If she doesn't cry and beg, then there'll be "sex" as well.

Comment on Page 138 by chumash99

chumash99 — Tue, 27 Jul 2010 02:51:57 +0000

"I didn't bring you here for sex." Oh, that's good; being a human punching bag is *so* much better than having some sleazebag slobber all over you. *eyeroll* This guy really needs to get out more.

Comment on Page 137 by chumash99

chumash99 — Mon, 19 Jul 2010 10:39:14 +0000

Alright, only a week between updates! Way to go! And ouch, *that* looks uncomfortable. Navin's a major-leage asshole. I hope Brin can get there soon.

Comment on Page 136 by chumash99

chumash99 — Sun, 18 Jul 2010 17:56:53 +0000

Poor Brin; I hope they can find Luette before it's too late.

Comment on Page 36 by Indig

Indig — Thu, 15 Jul 2010 09:20:12 +0000

Found a error in this comic.

You state that it is "One Years Ago", if it is, then the 's' isn't needed at the end of year. However, in your description you state that Jeb has had a year to settle in. The last flashback when Jeb was promoted was three years ago from the present, that would make this flashback occurring two years ago. So I'm assuming the error isn't in 'years' but in stating that it was one year ago when it should have been two.